12 Ekim 2009 Pazartesi

introduction

hi everybody,Iam seher and from hatay.But,I graduated from kilis nedim ökmen anatolian teacher training high school...Now,I am in metü...I am nineteen years old. I like playing volleyball and meeting new people. this is my first year in metü.I am happy for being in metü...because I think metü is a source for a good future life after üniversity...after graduation, the people is gualified for life.I hope I will be a gualified person for my future life.

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  1. Hi Seher. How are you? I read your writing and I want to comment about this. You didn't care of capital letters. You wrote that 'hi','seher','hatay',kilis nedim ökmen anatolian teacher training high school' and 'metü'. You must have put capital letter in front of these. You mustn't wrote 'üniversity',you must wrote university. I believe that you will write perfect essays if you correct these errors.
    See you...
    Fadime Yermez.

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